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LarsikFtw · 95 points · 11 years ago
there was a young bear who sat on a stump and pondered the wonders of the universe the bear finally discovered that the mighty penguin ruler was a camel and he was sad because he sentenced him to death because he stole the beautiful penguin jewel that belonged to camel and then the bear decided to run away from the stump and fled to the wayward desert there the magical wizard of the dunes stopped and told him and said "bear I can give you the freedom to not worry about the execution of yourself. instead we can overthrow the camel king" and they went back to the palace and challenged the king. The camel king to bear the great sword of nazareth conquered by the camel overlord and dune wizard wept because bear fought bravely but died (D:) the wizard then began to cast a revival spell on bear, suddenly bear arose and lashed out at camel king and camel king died (:D) then wizard and bear took the throne and became kings of penguins they erected a great statue depicting the battle between bear and camel king. and wizard declared peace in the land forever and ever. The end.

For those who doesn't like to make a pause after every word.

shadowflax · 40 points · 11 years ago
upvoted for the effort ;)

Maoman · 19 points · 11 years ago
Upvoted for stating why I upvoted

FaliusAren · 4 points · 11 years ago
There was a young bear who sat on a stump and pondered the wonder of the universe. The bear finally discovered that the mighty penguin ruler was a camel, and he was sad, because he sentenced him to death, because he stole the beautiful penguin jewel that belonged to Camel. And then the bead decided to run away from the stump and fled to the Wayward Desert. There, the Magical Wizard of the Dunes stopped and told him and said "Bear, I can give you the freedom to not worry about the execution of yourself. Instead, we can overthrow the Camel King", ant they went back to the palace and challenged the king. The Camel King to bear the Great Sword of Nazareth conquered by the Camel Overlored and Dune Wizard wept, because bear fought bravely... But died. The Wizard then began to cast a revival spell on bear. Suddenly, bear arose and lashed out at Camel King, and Camel King died. Then Wizard and Bear took the throne and became kings of penguins. They erected a great statue depicting the battle between Bear and Camel King, and wizard declared peace in the land, forever and ever. The end.

With capital letters and punctation.

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SoldierHair · 68 points · 11 years ago
even if many wouldn't agree with me, i am glad WiingS is back

gwss05 · 25 points · 11 years ago
well i agree with u ^^

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shadowflax · 37 points · 11 years ago
why. am. i reading. it. like. this? this. is. really. annoying. -_-

beks93 · 16 points · 11 years ago
I. know. right?

CritiqalErr0r · 6-Year Club · 0 points · 11 years ago
i still think this was made by one guy

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